http://www.freewebs.com/hawkuk64/

i know there are few mesteaks in coding but will take time on it. but i was wondering is there anything else that i can do to make homepage stand out more

Carlo

I think it's great. The only thing I can see wrong are the few images that aren't showing up. Good job though.

Yeah, just need to fix thoes images. I think that it would help your page be more organized and get the information across better, if you broke your one big page into smaller pages. You would also have to make a navigation menu, but they could just be text links.

EDIT: Oh, I just thought of this. Captions for pictures would be great, because some of the pictures don't seem to serve a purpose.

Good Luck,
David

images has caption now but even i noticed that at times pictures werent loading probaly hope i fix that .like to ask a question through ie is looking great for my webpage but looking through firefox and netscape my homepage looks terrable . any advice on this.?

http://www.freewebs.com/hawkuk64/index.html

Maybe you can try validating your codes. Lissa has a complete topic covering that on here website.

Needs work.

1) Check the spelling. Obviously.

2) There should be only two uses of images on your website. You have random images scattered around all over the place.

a) Integrated into the UI. Look at the top of this page. It says "HTML Help", "Forum", etc. This is an image that has been integrated into the UI.
b) Images put for the viewing pleasure of the user. Always group these images together in a table with THUMBNAILS that are all the same dimensions.

3) No animated cursors, or marquees. Use animated GIFs and javascripts in moderation. The javascripts and animated GIFs have to be subtle. Javascripts need to be used only when nessesary... for example, a popup. Sure there are a lot of cool things you can do with them, but they get annoying.

4) Get rid of the time thing... it is in the corner of the screen for everybody with a properly functioning motherboard.

5) Conistency. The designs on the different pages are completely different. The UI, background, font, colours, etc. on every page need to be the same.

6) The links need to be grouped together like image thumbnails.

Well, I think it is looking better. Really the only major problem with your site is organization.

Its good but ive noticed youve crammed everything into one page try and create different sections for example weapons,armour,eg.
But its getting there.
Also ive noticed your using free web which isnt a bad thing but its pretty restricted to what it can do i would recomend using bluevoda its really easy to use and good for beginners.
Hope this helped.:waves: