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SUPER RP06
02-28-2005, 09:43 PM
I saw the thread "write a story (http://www.lissaexplains.com/forum/showthread.php?t=71498)" today, but the rule was only 1 word. So I created a thread about writing a story, using many lines as you want.

...and PLEASE let other users post after you post (this means I let other people post after I post.)

I'll start:

Once upon a time, Sephanie and Alex was driving down a road on a spooky, scary and errie night in a 2005 Chrysler 300. Alex is the driver. Suddenly they saw a haunted house within sight. It's a full moon night. Suddenly they stopped in front of the enterance. Alex then parked the vechicle, turned off the engine, took the keys out the of ignition, and he and Sephanie got out of the car. Alex locked the doors of his car. Alex and Sephanie walked across the drawbridge, and opened the door of the haunted house

*CRRRREEEEEEEEK!*

Intrepid
03-01-2005, 09:33 PM
I saw the thread "write a story (http://www.lissaexplains.com/forum/showthread.php?t=71498)" today, but the rule was only 1 word. So I created a thread about writing a story, using many lines as you want.

...and PLEASE let other users post after you post (this means I let other people post after I post.)

I'll start:

Once upon a time, Sephanie and Alex was driving down a road on a spooky, scary and errie night in a 2005 Chrysler 300. Alex is the driver. Suddenly they saw a haunted house within sight. It's a full moon night. Suddenly they stopped in front of the enterance. Alex then parked the vechicle, turned off the engine, took the keys out the of ignition, and he and Sephanie got out of the car. Alex locked the doors of his car. Alex and Sephanie walked across the drawbridge, and opened the door of the haunted house

*CRRRREEEEEEEEK!*


The oak door creaked open for the intruders. Stephanie took a step back, hesitant. What if they were caught? What if the book was no longer there? It would all be done in vain.

Alex swiftly entered the abandoned manor; immediately pulling out a box of matches and a lighter. Stephanie bit her lip, nervously. She cautiously took her first step; not wanting to be heard.

Heard? Oh, get over it! There isn't a single person for miles away! I must stop this paranoia...everything is going to be fine.


"Will you stop it already! I asked you if you were sure, you said yes. Now stop your trembling, it's getting on my nerves," said Alex, clearly feeling quite uneasy himself.

Stephanie sent him a frustrated glare, how dare he speak to her this way? She had done nothing, but risk it all for the book. As soon as she found that book, she'd tear it to pieces! Oh the humiliation!

If people were to see those photographs...they'd be ruined.

The pictures were old and quite worn with age, but you could still clearly see...

Intrepid
03-01-2005, 09:45 PM
The oak door creaked open for the intruders. Stephanie took a step back, hesitant. What if they were caught? What if the book was no longer there? It would all be done in vain.

Alex swiftly entered the abandoned manor; immediately pulling out a box of matches and a lighter. Stephanie bit her lip, nervously. She cautiously took her first step; not wanting to be heard.

Heard? Oh, get over it! There isn't a single person for miles away! I must stop this paranoia...everything is going to be fine.


"Will you stop it already! I asked you if you were sure, you said yes. Now stop your trembling, it's getting on my nerves," said Alex, clearly feeling quite uneasy himself.

Stephanie sent him a frustrated glare, how dare he speak to her this way? She had done nothing, but risk it all for the book. As soon as she found that book, she'd tear it to pieces! Oh the humiliation!

If people were to see those photographs...they'd be ruined.

The pictures were old and quite worn with age, but you could still clearly see...


...those embarassing baby pictures!


" I swear, as soon as I get my hands on that book-huh?" Stephanie found her threat interrupted, an odd sound catching her ear.


"Who are you? No..I'm not going...what? Where are you taking me?!"

Alex!


Just as she had feared, Alex was no longer there. He had apparently walked away; while she had been complaining to herself. She quickly snatched her flashlight out of her satchel, and began to frantically illuminate the barren room.

So it's true. The legend. It's no urban legend...this home is truly haunted! I knew this was a big mistake...but I did it anyway. Wait. If, the legend is true...then that means that this manor is being haunted by...

- - - - - -
continue it! by what?

Katja
03-01-2005, 11:50 PM
...those embarassing baby pictures!


" I swear, as soon as I get my hands on that book-huh?" Stephanie found her threat interrupted, an odd sound catching her ear.


"Who are you? No..I'm not going...what? Where are you taking me?!"

Alex!


Just as she had feared, Alex was no longer there. He had apparently walked away; while she had been complaining to herself. She quickly snatched her flashlight out of her satchel, and began to frantically illuminate the barren room.

So it's true. The legend. It's no urban legend...this home is truly haunted! I knew this was a big mistake...but I did it anyway. Wait. If, the legend is true...then that means that this manor is being haunted by...

- - - - - -
continue it! by what?
A BANANA!!! The banana split itself to reveal Alex, then let him go, and the banana generated all the toppings on a banana split. Alex and Stephanie enjoyed the banana split untill...

petrianna
03-02-2005, 01:33 AM
A BANANA!!! The banana split itself to reveal Alex, then let him go, and the banana generated all the toppings on a banana split. Alex and Stephanie enjoyed the banana split untill...
The Banana Split awoke, terrifying Alex and Stephanie! Alex and Stephanie walked back, while the Banana Split followed them. They walked back, and back, and back until...

SUPER RP06
03-03-2005, 01:00 AM
(great! keep it up!)

...they ran!!! They ran as fast as they could, until Alex tripped over something. Alex exmained the object. "It's a jewel!" whispered Alex.

"No time to stop!" said Sephanie, "let's get out of here, FAST!"

They got out of the house, into Alex's car. They went in and buckled the seatbelt. Alex started the engine.

VROOM VROOM!

He shifted into gear, and drove away.

They went back to the City.

petrianna
03-03-2005, 01:30 AM
(great! keep it up!)

...they ran!!! They ran as fast as they could, until Alex tripped over something. Alex exmained the object. "It's a jewel!" whispered Alex.

"No time to stop!" said Sephanie, "let's get out of here, FAST!"

They got out of the house, into Alex's car. They went in and buckled the seatbelt. Alex started the engine.

VROOM VROOM!

He shifted into gear, and drove away.

They went back to the City.
When Alex and Stephanie arrived at the city, they noticed something different about the buildings... Holes. Holes everywhere. The noticed something else... No people. "We're the only two left!" Cried Alex. "How do you know?" Replied Stephanie. "I know. I know because I see strange prints on the ground. Plus, do you see any people around?" They looked at eachother, then the strange prints on the ground, then all around them. "ALIENS!" They cried. Suddenly, the ground started to shake. "Pitymoy. Grandaderal. Mini-Noo-naa?" Said something behind them. Alex and Stephanie turned around slowly... And noticed Aliens. Aliens that looked like this: :alien: "Na-moo-la?" The aliens asked. "Good thing I took alien lessons!" Wispered Alex to Stephanie. Alex walked up to the aliens and said "Mano-Mesha." Meaning What happened here? The aliens replied: "Gala-Nimoosha." Meaning...

SUPER RP06
03-03-2005, 10:39 PM
When Alex and Stephanie arrived at the city, they noticed something different about the buildings... Holes. Holes everywhere. The noticed something else... No people. "We're the only two left!" Cried Alex. "How do you know?" Replied Stephanie. "I know. I know because I see strange prints on the ground. Plus, do you see any people around?" They looked at eachother, then the strange prints on the ground, then all around them. "ALIENS!" They cried. Suddenly, the ground started to shake. "Pitymoy. Grandaderal. Mini-Noo-naa?" Said something behind them. Alex and Stephanie turned around slowly... And noticed Aliens. Aliens that looked like this: :alien: "Na-moo-la?" The aliens asked. "Good thing I took alien lessons!" Wispered Alex to Stephanie. Alex walked up to the aliens and said "Mano-Mesha." Meaning What happened here? The aliens replied: "Gala-Nimoosha." Meaning...

...This is Alien City.

"Alex! This is the wrong city! You've went the wrong way!" Sephanie said as Alex and Sephanie goes back to the 2005 Chrysler 300, started the engine, buckled their seatbelt, shifted into gear, and made an U-turn. They went on the freeway (super highway), going 100 km/h. They arrived at Toronto (their homeplace).

Toronto is a capitial city of Ontario. Ontario is a province of Canada. They went to their apartment and slept through the night.

At 7:00am, the buzzer went off on their alarm clock. Sephanie and Alex got up, took a shower, got dressed, and ate breakfast.

They watched the news. The news anchor says that the Prime Minister of Canada is dead

"OH MY GOSH! HE'S DEAD!!!!!" exclaimed Sephanie.
"HE'S DEAD!!!" cried Alex.
"Why are you crying?" said a person using his laptop.
"Matt, the prime minister of Canada is dead!" Sephanie and Alex cried.
Matt began to cry as well. Matt looked at the live webcam pictures on the computer and saw the Canadian flags on the poles become to go down to half-mast He called his local friends on his cell phone, and he e-mailed to his friends across Canada telling the prime minister of Canada is dead.

petrianna
03-03-2005, 11:37 PM
...This is Alien City.

"Alex! This is the wrong city! You've went the wrong way!" Sephanie said as Alex and Sephanie goes back to the 2005 Chrysler 300, started the engine, buckled their seatbelt, shifted into gear, and made an U-turn. They went on the freeway (super highway), going 100 km/h. They arrived at Toronto (their homeplace).

Toronto is a capitial city of Ontario. Ontario is a province of Canada. They went to their apartment and slept through the night.

At 7:00am, the buzzer went off on their alarm clock. Sephanie and Alex got up, took a shower, got dressed, and ate breakfast.

They watched the news. The news anchor says that the Prime Minister of Canada is dead

"OH MY GOSH! HE'S DEAD!!!!!" exclaimed Sephanie.
"HE'S DEAD!!!" cried Alex.
"Why are you crying?" said a person using his laptop.
"Matt, the prime minister of Canada is dead!" Sephanie and Alex cried.
Matt began to cry as well. Matt looked at the live webcam pictures on the computer and saw the Canadian flags on the poles become to go down to half-mast He called his local friends on his cell phone, and he e-mailed to his friends across Canada telling the prime minister of Canada is dead.
It was only a few hours until all of Canada was crying: "WHY MUST THE PRIME MINISTER BE DEAD!?! WWWHHHYYY!?!". Even the aliens knew.
Back in Alien City...
"Shefasomis, Lumater ore wieyr hal?" Said one alien. (Meaning A5, why should we go to help them calm down?) "Er daanoy." Said A5. (Meaning Because. Because they showed us how to make that delicious food the call "Popcorn".)

SUPER RP06
03-04-2005, 05:48 PM
The news anchor on TV said: "We got some video just in from an anonymus source. This video shows the prime minister was poisioned to death by a poisonous drink in a mug made by an unknown person. It was done by an evil plot. Seconds later, he or she made an evil laugh, and runs away. He or she was wearing a brown paper bag on his/her head with a question mark on front to protect the identity. The paper bag has cut out circles in the front to help the person see."

Meanwhile, many kilometres southwest of Toronto, in a town called Tilbury (which is also in Ontario, Canada), there was a young man called Ryan.

He checks the news all the time. Then he tunes to CBC News, and saw the coverage of the Prime Minister's death.

He changes the channel and tunes to CNN. The CNN anchor says: "We're keeping the eye on the Dow, as it's going to reach 12,000..." Ryan tunes immediately to CNBC. The CNBC reporter says "...Morning Call will be right back". A few minutes later, the CNBC reporter says: "The Dow Jones is just...Wait a minute! Dow has reached 12,000 already!"

Ryan then sounded the outside sirens, and annouced over the loudspeakers:

"ATTENTION! ATTENTION! DOW JONES HAS REACHED 12,000! REPEAT: DOW JONES HAS REACHED 12,000!"

Back in Toronto, Matt, Sephanie and Alex was notified about Ryan's annoucement. Back in Alien City, one alien said: "Han Kan-Noyyed Jao!" (Meaning: A5, I don't like this noise!)

petrianna
03-05-2005, 01:48 AM
The news anchor on TV said: "We got some video just in from an anonymus source. This video shows the prime minister was poisioned to death by a poisonous drink in a mug made by an unknown person. It was done by an evil plot. Seconds later, he or she made an evil laugh, and runs away. He or she was wearing a brown paper bag on his/her head with a question mark on front to protect the identity. The paper bag has cut out circles in the front to help the person see."

Meanwhile, many kilometres southwest of Toronto, in a town called Tilbury (which is also in Ontario, Canada), there was a young man called Ryan.

He checks the news all the time. Then he tunes to CBC News, and saw the coverage of the Prime Minister's death.

He changes the channel and tunes to CNN. The CNN anchor says: "We're keeping the eye on the Dow, as it's going to reach 12,000..." Ryan tunes immediately to CNBC. The CNBC reporter says "...Morning Call will be right back". A few minutes later, the CNBC reporter says: "The Dow Jones is just...Wait a minute! Dow has reached 12,000 already!"

Ryan then sounded the outside sirens, and annouced over the loudspeakers:

"ATTENTION! ATTENTION! DOW JONES HAS REACHED 12,000! REPEAT: DOW JONES HAS REACHED 12,000!"

Back in Toronto, Matt, Sephanie and Alex was notified about Ryan's annoucement. Back in Alien City, one alien said: "Han Kan-Noyyed Jao!" (Meaning: A5, I don't like this noise!)
A5 replied: "Nishemasete!" Meaning Do you think I like it, A6!?!"Pitamisomet." replied A6. Meaning Umm... No...
Back at Toronto...
"I still can't believe the Prime Minister is DEAD!" Cried Alex. "You've been saying that all morning. And get serious, we'll get a new Prime Minister." replied Stephanie in a "YOU CAN'T ARGUE WITH ME" voice.
"Great news people!" Said the Reporter. "The Prime Minister isn't dead! He just suffered from a very rare disease called "Chicken Poxs". "CUT!" Cried the camera man. "Chicken Pox are little um... Red circle thingies that everybody get ONCE. It was called "Mumbo Jumbo"." "Oh, sorry, Cam." Then the ground started to shake. "Alex! HELP!" Stephanie cried. Alex turned around, noticing only the couch. Even the T.V. was gone!

SUPER RP06
03-05-2005, 07:50 PM
A5 replied: "Nishemasete!" Meaning Do you think I like it, A6!?!"Pitamisomet." replied A6. Meaning Umm... No...
Back at Toronto...
"I still can't believe the Prime Minister is DEAD!" Cried Alex. "You've been saying that all morning. And get serious, we'll get a new Prime Minister." replied Stephanie in a "YOU CAN'T ARGUE WITH ME" voice.
"Great news people!" Said the Reporter. "The Prime Minister isn't dead! He just suffered from a very rare disease called "Chicken Poxs". "CUT!" Cried the camera man. "Chicken Pox are little um... Red circle thingies that everybody get ONCE. It was called "Mumbo Jumbo"." "Oh, sorry, Cam." Then the ground started to shake. "Alex! HELP!" Stephanie cried. Alex turned around, noticing only the couch. Even the T.V. was gone!

Alex noticed there's a hole in the ground behind the couch. Alex turned on the flashlight and saw Sephanie. "Are you alright?" Alex said. "I'm alright!" said Sephanie. "Matt! Come here! QuicK!" Alex said. Matt comes over and saw a hole. They noticed a ladder which is attached on a wall. Matt and Alex climed down the ladder. The lights goes on automatically.

"It's a road tunnel!' said Matt, "And look! 2 scooters! Sephanie and I can drive scooters."

Sephanie gets up and she, Matt and Alex wore their helmets. Sephanie hopped on one scooter, while Matt and Alex hopped in another scooter. They started the scooters, noticed it has a full tank of fuel, and they go down the road tunnel with their headlights on. They got out of the tunnel and drove to downtown Toronto.

petrianna
03-05-2005, 10:37 PM
Alex noticed there's a hole in the ground behind the couch. Alex turned on the flashlight and saw Sephanie. "Are you alright?" Alex said. "I'm alright!" said Sephanie. "Matt! Come here! QuicK!" Alex said. Matt comes over and saw a hole. They noticed a ladder which is attached on a wall. Matt and Alex climed down the ladder. The lights goes on automatically.

"It's a road tunnel!' said Matt, "And look! 2 scooters! Sephanie and I can drive scooters."

Sephanie gets up and she, Matt and Alex wore their helmets. Sephanie hopped on one scooter, while Matt and Alex hopped in another scooter. They started the scooters, noticed it has a full tank of fuel, and they go down the road tunnel with their headlights on. They got out of the tunnel and drove to downtown Toronto.
They drove down the tunnel, farther and farther. It seemed like it would never end.
After 2 whole hours, they finally noticed... They were going in circles. "We've been going in circles!" Cried Matt angrily. "Who are you, Matt the Monster!?!" laughed Alex. "No... In fact I'm Godzilla!" cried Matt even more angrily. "Break up, break up!" Cried Stephanie. "Give me a piggy back!" "What?" Cried Alex and Matt at the same time. "Are you ten or something?" Cried Matt. "Fine." said Stephanie stubbornly. "I'll go sit against the wall to think."
"Think about what?" asked Alex.
"Gee, I don't know."
Stephanie went to go sit against the wall. *THUMP!* Stephanie fell through the wall. "Your car, Alex!" <----End of story
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SUPER RP06
03-06-2005, 03:44 PM
End of story

End of story?!!!!!!!!!

We're starting another one!

(this is fictional)

Once upon a time in 1999, rumors said the world goiing to be an end on January 1st, 2000 because of the last 2 digits of the year in computerized systems. When the clock strikes Midnight January 1 2000, it will display "00", since 00 is less than 99, it could cause worldwide chaos.

On January 1st, 1999, at 8:00am, a 20-year-old woman called Michelle just made a list of what things that will happen in 2000. "Here is a list of what will happen in the year 2000," she said.

Miles, a 21-year-old, man read the list.



THINGS THAT WILL HAPPEN IN 2000.

-Asteroid hits earth
-War
-Alien invades earth
-giant tsunami
-massive earthquakes
-Volcanos eurpting worldwide
-Climate shift
-Firestorms
-Worldwide chaos
-Biologial outrage
(Note: I don't want to list them all)

"Ha Ha Ha! Very funny! This won't gonna happen in 2000!" laughed Miles.

"This is very very very serious!" said Michelle, "There would be mass casulties!"

March 1st, 1999

Michelle and Miles grabbed their laptops, and logged on. They connected to the Internet. They were getting information from various sources about the Y2K thing. They were closing the pop-up ads that go to sites for nudity, winning money, to buy porducts, etc. But Matt accidently clicked on the pop-up, not the close button, and went to the site that shows nude girls suitable for 18+. The cat jumps on Matt's sholder and saw the breasts on the screen. Matt then immediately closed the window. Before Matt closed the window, Michelle saw the nude girls site on Matt's laptop. She saw the URL, and types the URL in the "Naughty site list." Then Matt re-opens the browser window and visited many Y2K sites. It has lots of information about Y2K.

petrianna
03-07-2005, 02:43 AM
Well I ment to say end of PARAGRAPH but, too late to turn around now.

Once upon a time in 1999, rumors said the world goiing to be an end on January 1st, 2000 because of the last 2 digits of the year in computerized systems. When the clock strikes Midnight January 1 2000, it will display "00", since 00 is less than 99, it could cause worldwide chaos.

On January 1st, 1999, at 8:00am, a 20-year-old woman called Michelle just made a list of what things that will happen in 2000. "Here is a list of what will happen in the year 2000," she said.

Miles, a 21-year-old, man read the list.




THINGS THAT WILL HAPPEN IN 2000.

-Asteroid hits earth
-War
-Alien invades earth
-giant tsunami
-massive earthquakes
-Volcanos eurpting worldwide
-Climate shift
-Firestorms
-Worldwide chaos
-Biologial outrage
(Note: I don't want to list them all)

"Ha Ha Ha! Very funny! This won't gonna happen in 2000!" laughed Miles.

"This is very very very serious!" said Michelle, "There would be mass casulties!"

March 1st, 1999

Michelle and Miles grabbed their laptops, and logged on. They connected to the Internet. They were getting information from various sources about the Y2K thing. They were closing the pop-up ads that go to sites for nudity, winning money, to buy porducts, etc. But Matt accidently clicked on the pop-up, not the close button, and went to the site that shows nude girls suitable for 18+. The cat jumps on Matt's sholder and saw the breasts on the screen. Matt then immediately closed the window. Before Matt closed the window, Michelle saw the nude girls site on Matt's laptop. She saw the URL, and types the URL in the "Naughty site list." Then Matt re-opens the browser window and visited many Y2K sites. It has lots of information about Y2K.
It even had more information about Y2K that Miles' laptop overloaded with data. Soon it crashed. "DARN!!!" Cried Miles. "At least it didn't blow up, Miles!" laughed Michelle. Then it blew up. "You had to open your big mouth!" cried Miles. "Well sorry!" said Michelle, trying to keep her giggles in. Then she burst into tears. "Ha, ha! Sorry I can't... RESIST! HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA!

SUPER RP06
03-12-2005, 12:51 AM
It even had more information about Y2K that Miles' laptop overloaded with data. Soon it crashed. "DARN!!!" Cried Miles. "At least it didn't blow up, Miles!" laughed Michelle. Then it blew up. "You had to open your big mouth!" cried Miles. "Well sorry!" said Michelle, trying to keep her giggles in. Then she burst into tears. "Ha, ha! Sorry I can't... RESIST! HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA!

Then the doorbell rang. Miles answered the door. 2 new laptops and 2 new PDAs was left on the doorstep with a note.

Miles read the note: It says:

I saw through the window 2 laptops exploded, so I brought you 2 new laptops. I also got you 2 new PDAs.

Yours truly, Mike.

May 1999

8 months until Y2K, Miles and Michelle were testing their laptops for Y2K compliance. It was ok. Hours later, they established an organization called "the Y2K Team" Mike joined the group, as well as Christina, Sephanie, Raymond, Danielle, Michael, Chris, Alex, Jessie, Joey, Amy, Christine, Jeff and Robert. Their ages range from 21 to 23. They got laptops and PDAs as well. In June of 1999, the Y2K team got 3 cars for transport. It's a 1999 Dodge Neon. They put the text on their cars: The Y2K team. They put the number 1, 2, 3 for car 1, 2 and 3.

Mike drives car 1. Michael drives car 2. Amy drives car 3.