View Full Version : I need a review for this song!


Rickyhos
12-29-2004, 07:00 AM
My hair is frozen, standing out in the cold,
Oh, but that’s not me waiting for you,
I’m just gazing at the stars ( yeah, that’s it)
I Don’t have a ride home, could I just come in to warm up?
That’s not me trying to get close,
Im just getting sick and need some heat ( …getting lonely)
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I’m starting to think of what could be,
But that is worse than having noting at all,
False hope it’s the worst kind, give me something real,
I don’t care- even if I have to steal your heart,
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That’s not me- yeah, it just can’t be,
Oh, it hurts to be this proud,
Why won’t you just kill me?
My heart is beating too loud,
But still I sing for you like a never ending story,
But being with you is like rubbing salt on my cut,

I can’t help it that I hate my heart,
If only I could live without it ( or without you)
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Then I’d be set. (Then I’d be set)

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Chorus
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But stealing is wrong
So I’ll just have to settle with myself, ( or forget )
That’s not me crying, My allergies are acting up, do you have a cat?

>
( I don’t think I can go on like this, so I will hate you instead.)
( I don’t think I can go on like this, so I will hate you instead.)
( I don’t think I can go on like this, so I will hate you instead.)
( I don’t think I can go on like this, so I will hate you instead.)


I <3 LEIA, so someone post!

chazvik
12-29-2004, 10:07 AM
Yeah!!! thats good do you have a band?

Rickyhos
12-29-2004, 05:46 PM
Well, Not yet but me and a friend are seriously thinking about starting one, he writes too. I think I will be singing and he will play the guitar with back up lyrics.

Thanks for the review!! ^_^

chazvik
12-29-2004, 05:50 PM
its a o.k , if you ever get a band i can help you make a website for it :)

Rickyhos
12-29-2004, 05:54 PM
Nice, well everyone can help think of a name for an Emo/indie/alternative rock band!

Ima suposta do it but names are what I suck at the most....

chazvik
12-29-2004, 05:57 PM
ermmmmm
im not good at that
if oyu tell me a bit about what you and your friends like then i can help :)

how about "The differentials" lol :)

Rickyhos
12-29-2004, 05:59 PM
Bands I like;
Coheed and Cambria
Thursday
Brand New
Taking Back Sunday
Sparta
Cursive
A.Voice.Like.Rhetoric.

chazvik
12-29-2004, 06:16 PM
how about "never ending story" ?

Rickyhos
12-29-2004, 06:23 PM
Thats ok

NES lol sweet ^_^

chazvik
12-29-2004, 06:27 PM
:) glad you like it

i got it from your song thats why i suggested it

Rickyhos
12-29-2004, 06:29 PM
lol don't worry I relised that.

I am still open to suggestions though.